Ki Ora Micah it's Chloe W. I really like how you used adjectives to describe the amazing story/slide. It reminds me of when I went to the museum but the slides way cooler and I really enjoy the song. Next time add a bit more pictures and besides that i was fantastic. Great job Chloe W
We liked how you chose to write a story about a Chimp and space. We thought that Ham might drown in the sea but were happy to hear that the helicopter rescued him. Next time you could add in some more pictures or videos. Fantastic story from Matai Learning space :)
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Ki Ora Micah it's Chloe W. I really like how you used adjectives to describe the amazing story/slide. It reminds me of when I went to the museum but the slides way cooler and I really enjoy the song. Next time add a bit more pictures and besides that i was fantastic. Great job Chloe W
ReplyDeletethanks Chloe I will try to put more pics in :)
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ReplyDeleteWe liked how you chose to write a story about a Chimp and space.
ReplyDeleteWe thought that Ham might drown in the sea but were happy to hear that the helicopter rescued him.
Next time you could add in some more pictures or videos.
Fantastic story from Matai Learning space :)